Sunday, August 15, 2010

Brotherhood

The independence of thy nation,
Is utterly endearing for me.
Life is blessed due to Her ration,
For this is the perfect time to see.


In our country's diversity,
There is no dearth.
We, Indians have oodles of tenacity;
Which is prevalent from our birth.


India, our native land;
Is an abode of tranquillity.
We will all walk together hand-in-hand,
And prove our utmost solidarity.

19 comments:

  1. Hope this solidarity continues in days to come and we can all work together to restore India to her past glory!

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  2. Yes we need consolidated efforts...

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  3. Lovely poem. Thanks for making my day special.

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  4. Freedom from dependence is independence. Hats off to the poet. Jai Hind.

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  5. Brotherhood is all we need today. I loved the poem to the core.

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  6. Independence means a lot to us even if we take it for granted. Simple yet stunning piece of writing, Bedit.

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  7. Short & sweet. Very likeable...

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  8. I read this poem 7 times. Amazing lines...
    Really touching !!

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  9. Way to Go Brother.. Amazing Lines.. i'm touched !!

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  10. "The independence of thy nation,
    Is utterly endearing for me.
    Life is blessed due to Her ration,"

    Is there a pun here: Independence of thy nation.................blessed due to Her ration: Independence-dependence on Ration?

    Well, pun or not pun, I like it!:)

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  11. Amazing poem on patriotism. Keep it up.

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  12. The poem reminds me of our rich heritage. It's always a delight to read poems written by Bedit.

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  13. The significance of this poem resonates so much in our daily lives. The verses are subtle as well.

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  14. 'Brotherhood' is rocking, bro.
    One of your best works. I truly admire your writing.

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  15. I'm not the kind of person who understands or likes poetry. It would be highly appreciated, if you write some articles

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  16. Everyday we are increasing our dependence on independence. I guess everyone will agree with me. Serene thoughts put together in a magnificent composition.
    Well done.

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  17. Patriotism at its best. The rendition is superb.
    Mind-Blowing work !!

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  18. the picture is too catchy whit the meaning of ur poem, carry on.

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