Is utterly endearing for me.
Life is blessed due to Her ration,
For this is the perfect time to see.
In our country's diversity,
There is no dearth.
We, Indians have oodles of tenacity;
Which is prevalent from our birth.
India, our native land;
Is an abode of tranquillity.
We will all walk together hand-in-hand,
And prove our utmost solidarity.
Hope this solidarity continues in days to come and we can all work together to restore India to her past glory!
ReplyDeleteYes we need consolidated efforts...
ReplyDeleteLovely poem. Thanks for making my day special.
ReplyDeleteFreedom from dependence is independence. Hats off to the poet. Jai Hind.
ReplyDeleteBrotherhood is all we need today. I loved the poem to the core.
ReplyDeleteIndependence means a lot to us even if we take it for granted. Simple yet stunning piece of writing, Bedit.
ReplyDeleteShort & sweet. Very likeable...
ReplyDeleteI read this poem 7 times. Amazing lines...
ReplyDeleteReally touching !!
Way to Go Brother.. Amazing Lines.. i'm touched !!
ReplyDelete"The independence of thy nation,
ReplyDeleteIs utterly endearing for me.
Life is blessed due to Her ration,"
Is there a pun here: Independence of thy nation.................blessed due to Her ration: Independence-dependence on Ration?
Well, pun or not pun, I like it!:)
Amazing poem on patriotism. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteThe poem reminds me of our rich heritage. It's always a delight to read poems written by Bedit.
ReplyDeleteThe significance of this poem resonates so much in our daily lives. The verses are subtle as well.
ReplyDelete'Brotherhood' is rocking, bro.
ReplyDeleteOne of your best works. I truly admire your writing.
I'm not the kind of person who understands or likes poetry. It would be highly appreciated, if you write some articles
ReplyDeleteEveryday we are increasing our dependence on independence. I guess everyone will agree with me. Serene thoughts put together in a magnificent composition.
ReplyDeleteWell done.
Patriotism at its best. The rendition is superb.
ReplyDeleteMind-Blowing work !!
the picture is too catchy whit the meaning of ur poem, carry on.
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