Sunday, August 1, 2010

Bonding - An Ode To Friendship

What I feel for you, my confidant;
Is of primary concern.
All my feelings are,
Assembled into one.


The valley is green,
As you know me in and out.
Thou were beside me,
In those troubled times.


Now when I close my eyes,
I see you in the yonder.
But I can sense the proximity,
Because a friend is always there for now and forever !!

30 comments:

  1. the best poem for today's occasion :)good one :)

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  2. The bonding words are fantastic and it bonds well with the image..keep it up.

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  3. Amazing poem. Quite symbolic as well.

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  4. What a poem...
    Nice choice of words as well.
    All the best.

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  5. Swati SubramaniumAugust 2, 2010 at 6:51 PM

    Bonding is what makes our lives so special. Bedit, you are the most promising poet we have in our times. And trust me, I'm not exaggerating a bit.

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  6. Nicely Written thumbs UP to you :)

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  7. intersting ... it has an old world feel to it i like :-)

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  8. You made my day !! Bedit, the poet rocks BIG time...

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  9. Hats off to Mr.Banerjee composing such a thought provoking poem. It's a master-piece.

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  10. I never knew anyone so talented like you.
    Expression matters a lot.
    How you defined friendship is beautiful, truly beautiful.

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  11. nice one, but previous one is better

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  12. a nice one bedit bhai... perfect for this friendship season... Happy Friendship Day :-)

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  13. Last lines are so nice .... Friends Forever..

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  14. very well written...you should try copy writing for e-cards...truly...

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  15. Congratulations for all the accolades, buddy.
    I agree with Swati that you are the most promising poet we have.
    Wonderful poem.

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  16. Beautiful poem.
    Amazing words !!
    I'm dumb founded.
    Keep it up...

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  17. The best poem on friendship, I have read.
    The significance is amazing as well.

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  18. 'Friendship' at its best.
    Lovely verses...
    Enjoyed it to the core.
    Immensely likeable.

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