What I feel for you, my confidant;
Is of primary concern.
All my feelings are,
Assembled into one.
The valley is green,
As you know me in and out.
Thou were beside me,
In those troubled times.
Now when I close my eyes,
I see you in the yonder.
But I can sense the proximity,
Because a friend is always there for now and forever !!
the best poem for today's occasion :)good one :)
ReplyDeletethumbs up
ReplyDeleteThe bonding words are fantastic and it bonds well with the image..keep it up.
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem. Quite symbolic as well.
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem...
ReplyDeleteNice choice of words as well.
All the best.
Bonding is what makes our lives so special. Bedit, you are the most promising poet we have in our times. And trust me, I'm not exaggerating a bit.
ReplyDeleteNicely Written thumbs UP to you :)
ReplyDeletewonderful thoughts Bedit :-))
ReplyDeleteintersting ... it has an old world feel to it i like :-)
ReplyDeleteYou made my day !! Bedit, the poet rocks BIG time...
ReplyDeleteHats off to Mr.Banerjee composing such a thought provoking poem. It's a master-piece.
ReplyDeleteI never knew anyone so talented like you.
ReplyDeleteExpression matters a lot.
How you defined friendship is beautiful, truly beautiful.
Well done :-)
ReplyDeleteToo good! :)
ReplyDeletenice one, but previous one is better
ReplyDeletea nice one bedit bhai... perfect for this friendship season... Happy Friendship Day :-)
ReplyDeletenice :)
ReplyDeleteNice lines...
ReplyDeletei like :D
ReplyDeleteLast lines are so nice .... Friends Forever..
ReplyDeletelovely :):)
ReplyDeletevery well written...you should try copy writing for e-cards...truly...
ReplyDeletereally put so nicely.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for all the accolades, buddy.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Swati that you are the most promising poet we have.
Wonderful poem.
So true! :) Nicely penned!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem.
ReplyDeleteAmazing words !!
I'm dumb founded.
Keep it up...
nice one... loved it!
ReplyDeleteThe best poem on friendship, I have read.
ReplyDeleteThe significance is amazing as well.
'Friendship' at its best.
ReplyDeleteLovely verses...
Enjoyed it to the core.
Immensely likeable.