Thursday, July 21, 2011

Precedence

The time is suitably ripe,
To set ablaze the pyre.
My eyes are moist which I tend to wipe,
And hope that the consequences are not dire.

“What had gone wrong?”
I ask thyself bewilderedly.
Alas! There was no harmony left in the song;
This compelled me to make amends dissentingly.

Priorities came into forth at an early stage;
Their curious assortment had its own role to play.
With much difficulty I extricate myself from the cage;
To unleash a new ME and eventually call it a day.


35 comments:

  1. What an amazing poem! I'm glad that I'm the first one to comment. Bedit, please write more poems.

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  2. Loved the climax lines and thoughts .. hope you do find satisfaction with this creative outlet :)


    @Nimue_

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  3. Awesome poem. Loved it to the core. Bedit, you are a Rockstar!

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  4. The poem is truly amazing. I could relate to it very much. The verses touch your heart. Keep writing!

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  5. Beautiful creations!!! :):) keep writing!

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  6. nice... i like it... keep it up with good work..

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  7. very nice. emotions is dripping in the lines.liked it.

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  8. wow!! u rock!!i've never seen any lines marinated with so much emotions and sentiments( not 2 mention the good vocub) b4 this.good work amateur shakespeare!!!!!!

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  9. lovely....loved it...

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  10. Its Ayush !!!

    Stupendous utilization of words. Never seen such great use of words before. There is a long way to go my friend. Thumbs up for u and always be!! :-)

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  11. beautifully written Bedit.. i think there is some kind of unknown element ..not all is explained and that is beautiful.. Mitali.

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  12. What an intoxicating mix of words and feelings! I'm truly impressed. Have you published your poems? The whole world needs to have a look at them. Post more poems asap. Please please.

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  13. Nice it is :) Esp the ending.

    -PP

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  14. The best poem I've read in recent times and I mean it from the bottom of my heart. The poem has a unique subtlety to it. Can I get you autograph, Sir? Will keep it as a memoir. I'm your FAN for life. Cheers to PRECEDENCE!

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  15. I related to the feelings ... It's that time when you have so much to do that sleep alludes you and clear thinking ! :-)

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  16. In awe of the lyrical poem. One of your best works. Please compose more poems and make us all happy. You are a ROCKSTAR!

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  17. Wow, beautiful poem mate. Thanks for sharing and keep them coming!

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  18. Very nice... liked it ... keep posting :)

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  19. nice...break free...your lines have a very nice flow to them...

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