Those times were profoundly gifted,
When thou were in my arms.
Consequently our spirits got lifted;
Like the tricks with which an enchanter charms.
It came as a bolt from the blue,
When thou decided it was better to evanesce.
Thy life had lost its hue,
Contradictions forced us to buy peace.
"What do we aspire to be?"
Is of paramount significance.
Let's simplify and unlock the key;
And preserve it with eternal remembrance.
Beautiful poem. Thank you for making my day & you defined friendship so well. You are a genius, dear. Please publish your poems.
ReplyDeleteWell written :) Have a good day with your friends.
ReplyDeletelovely verse...speaks of a solid foundation for any relationship...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Poem
ReplyDeleteGood poem man
ReplyDeletereminds me of friendships and loved ones lost .... well written ... u reach hearts baby ...
ReplyDeleteA beautiful and uplifting poem. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteKeep this up friend
ReplyDeleteamazing.. Superb work!! Realy liked it... Publish ur poems bro..
ReplyDeleteNice Poem :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing poem!! While reading it, I went into flashback recollecting some incidents in life. You've written it so well that it reaches the very depth of all the suppressed emotions we've. Kudos!!
ReplyDelete@nandini1708
I loved the poem to the core. What subtle imagery. You are one truly gifted poet. Please write more poems. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteWonderful words and never ending inspiring Poem...Suerlike...
ReplyDeleteOne of your best poems till date. I'm a regular visitor to your blog. Your sensitivity has touched many lives including mine. You are the BEST poet around, seriously. Do write poems more often.
ReplyDeleteNice! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. Profound.
ReplyDeleteThe brevity was precise.
No extra words.
:) well written beautiful
ReplyDeleteBedit, your poetic skills rock big time. Am a fan for life. We should start your Fan Club, seriously. What inspires you as a poet?
ReplyDeletebeautiful thanks for starting my day of with some lovely thoughts x
ReplyDeleteI'd agree with "profound", "beautiful", and "well-written" Thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteIt was a lovely read.
ReplyDeleteI loved the first stanza.