Sunday, August 7, 2011

Flavours

Those times were profoundly gifted,
When thou were in my arms.
Consequently our spirits got lifted;
Like the tricks with which an enchanter charms.

It came as a bolt from the blue,
When thou decided it was better to evanesce.
Thy life had lost its hue,
Contradictions forced us to buy peace.

"What do we aspire to be?"
Is of paramount significance.
Let's simplify and unlock the key;
And preserve it with eternal remembrance.


21 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem. Thank you for making my day & you defined friendship so well. You are a genius, dear. Please publish your poems.

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  2. Well written :) Have a good day with your friends.

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  3. lovely verse...speaks of a solid foundation for any relationship...

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  4. reminds me of friendships and loved ones lost .... well written ... u reach hearts baby ...

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  5. A beautiful and uplifting poem. Thank you for sharing.

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  6. amazing.. Superb work!! Realy liked it... Publish ur poems bro..

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  7. Amazing poem!! While reading it, I went into flashback recollecting some incidents in life. You've written it so well that it reaches the very depth of all the suppressed emotions we've. Kudos!!

    @nandini1708

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  8. I loved the poem to the core. What subtle imagery. You are one truly gifted poet. Please write more poems. Keep up the great work!

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  9. Wonderful words and never ending inspiring Poem...Suerlike...

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  10. One of your best poems till date. I'm a regular visitor to your blog. Your sensitivity has touched many lives including mine. You are the BEST poet around, seriously. Do write poems more often.

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  11. Beautiful. Profound.
    The brevity was precise.
    No extra words.

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  12. Dipanjan Roy ChowdhuryAugust 10, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    Bedit, your poetic skills rock big time. Am a fan for life. We should start your Fan Club, seriously. What inspires you as a poet?

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  13. beautiful thanks for starting my day of with some lovely thoughts x

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  14. I'd agree with "profound", "beautiful", and "well-written" Thanks for sharing!

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  15. It was a lovely read.
    I loved the first stanza.

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