Everyone seems to 'care'.
Is bliss present in the pair?
Not at all, masks they wear.
He is busy on a call,
She prefers a mall.
Both are having a ball,
Unknowingly; they fall.
Then they realize,
That it is not wise;
To pretend to be nice,
And do things beyond one's size.
It's really awesome !! Love is nicely depicted in this poem.
ReplyDeleteLovely poem... Nice choice of words, Bedit.
ReplyDeleteThe poem depicts the truth about the complexities of love nowadays. It's one of the best poems I have read in recent times.
ReplyDeleteHat's off to the poet !! What a nice potrayal of modern 'Love'.
ReplyDeleteWhat amazes me is the poet's simplicity !! Hail ho...
ReplyDeleteGreat sentiments, Mr.Banerjee.
ReplyDeleteA complete parody on 'Love'. Congratulations for all the applause !!
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem !! Am speechless. :)
ReplyDeleteThe pros and cons of Love in a nutshell. Awe-inspiring.
ReplyDeleteThe poem 'Love' can be best described as an ode to the best feeling in the world.
ReplyDeleteI don't have words for 'Love'. Am dumbfounded by the content.
ReplyDelete'Love' is lovely. I felt priveleged after reading the poem. Thanks, Bedit.
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