Thursday, December 24, 2009

Love

Love is in the air,
Everyone seems to 'care'.
Is bliss present in the pair?
Not at all, masks they wear.


He is busy on a call,
She prefers a mall.
Both are having a ball,
Unknowingly; they fall.


Then they realize,
That it is not wise;
To pretend to be nice,
And do things beyond one's size.


13 comments:

  1. It's really awesome !! Love is nicely depicted in this poem.

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  2. Lovely poem... Nice choice of words, Bedit.

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  3. The poem depicts the truth about the complexities of love nowadays. It's one of the best poems I have read in recent times.

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  4. Kanishka RoychowdhuryDecember 26, 2009 at 4:13 PM

    Hat's off to the poet !! What a nice potrayal of modern 'Love'.

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  5. What amazes me is the poet's simplicity !! Hail ho...

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  6. Great sentiments, Mr.Banerjee.

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  7. A complete parody on 'Love'. Congratulations for all the applause !!

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  8. What a poem !! Am speechless. :)

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  9. The pros and cons of Love in a nutshell. Awe-inspiring.

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  10. The poem 'Love' can be best described as an ode to the best feeling in the world.

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  11. I don't have words for 'Love'. Am dumbfounded by the content.

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  12. Anindita Ghosh DastidarMarch 9, 2010 at 11:39 AM

    'Love' is lovely. I felt priveleged after reading the poem. Thanks, Bedit.

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