To eradicate human fission.
It is my sole ambition,
Which has to be achieved in any condition.
I try my best,
To protect the 'nest'.
But due to my haste,
I mistake my effort as a waste.
Later, I found an effective way;
To settle down and pray.
Amazingly, they cease to stray,
And truly; this makes my day !!
nice :)
ReplyDeletevery well written!
ReplyDeleteGood one! :)
ReplyDeleteNice poem !! Bedit, you are one poet that whose work impresses all and sundry. Keep it up !!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is awesome. I can really connect with this. Great job, Bedit.
ReplyDeleteWhat a poem...
ReplyDeleteLoved it to the core.
The poet deserves a round of applause.
All the expressions in the poem are written in simple words. Subtlety is the key, my dear...
ReplyDeleteA well-written poem. Best wishes for your future posts.
ReplyDeleteAccomplishment is the other name of success. It's quite difficult to achieve it. The poem depicts this in a positive manner. Nice thoughts, Bedit...
ReplyDeleteA heart rending poem. A pat on your back, Bedit. :)))
ReplyDeleteSimplicity is what amazes me. And your poem is AMAZING.
ReplyDeleteIts a nice write up... Just give importance to the Semiotices part.... None the less it did touch my heart.
ReplyDeleteHope all your missions get accomplished like this. Great going, Mr.Poet.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading the poem, I felt rejuvenated. Continue writing poems for us, Bedit...
ReplyDeleteur the inspiration to young poet..fresh and awesome writing! ! ! god bless :)
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