Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Mission: Accomplished

I am on a mission,
To eradicate human fission.
It is my sole ambition,
Which has to be achieved in any condition.


I try my best,
To protect the 'nest'.
But due to my haste,
I mistake my effort as a waste.


Later, I found an effective way;
To settle down and pray.
Amazingly, they cease to stray,
And truly; this makes my day !!



15 comments:

  1. Nice poem !! Bedit, you are one poet that whose work impresses all and sundry. Keep it up !!

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  2. The poem is awesome. I can really connect with this. Great job, Bedit.

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  3. What a poem...
    Loved it to the core.
    The poet deserves a round of applause.

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  4. All the expressions in the poem are written in simple words. Subtlety is the key, my dear...

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  5. A well-written poem. Best wishes for your future posts.

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  6. Accomplishment is the other name of success. It's quite difficult to achieve it. The poem depicts this in a positive manner. Nice thoughts, Bedit...

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  7. A heart rending poem. A pat on your back, Bedit. :)))

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  8. Simplicity is what amazes me. And your poem is AMAZING.

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  9. Its a nice write up... Just give importance to the Semiotices part.... None the less it did touch my heart.

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  10. Hope all your missions get accomplished like this. Great going, Mr.Poet.

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  11. After reading the poem, I felt rejuvenated. Continue writing poems for us, Bedit...

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  12. ur the inspiration to young poet..fresh and awesome writing! ! ! god bless :)

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