Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Departure

I am bidding goodbye,
To the epitome of my soul;
My memories try to tie,
And boggle me down in the hole.


It is time,
To stop the flowing emotions roar;
I order myself to mime,
And stop being a 'bore'.


I am what I am,
Because of what you have made me;
Here's wishing you loads of wham,
And hoping that you will never forget thee.


33 comments:

  1. Good poem... loved the pic as well. Reminded me of "Up In The Air" ... Keep writing. :)

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  2. Awesome post, Bedit. You surprise me everytime.

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  3. Good poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks.
    Yadu Singh, Sydney
    www.yadusingh.wordpress.com
    www.twitter.com/dryadusingh

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  4. superb :) loved the last para

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  5. Sahi Hai Bhidu
    Salutations from Mumbhai

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  6. Hey nice poem.....and yess d pic reminded me too of Up In the Air!

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  7. What a lovely poem !! Bedit, the poet rocks BIG time...

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  8. Sanjukto ChatterjeeJune 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    I read the poem 17 times. I guess it explains everything. Serene rendition. Anyways, departure is always painful. So, don't worry.

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  9. agree with sanjukto ..departure is painful and best to capture it in words than tears

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  10. That pic does look like a poster of 'Up In The Air'-anyway nice piece. :))

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  11. nyc ....

    remind me of mangalore plane crash

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  12. good one !! keep it up !! :)

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  13. none shall forget you if you are just yourself and we change for ourselves, none can really make us what we are.... i also believed it, but it is crap!

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  14. lovely.....loved the pic toooo..touching!!

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  15. lovely....loved d pic..touching!!

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  16. lovely poem ..! nicely written and the pic adds flavor to it..!

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  17. I'm in love with this poem. I read it again & again. A complete winner all the way. :)))

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  18. very well composed :)touching....

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  19. Deepshika KapoorJune 15, 2010 at 8:04 PM

    Brilliant. What a poem. I was blown away totally. Bedit, you should consider becoming a full time poet. :-}

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  20. 'Departure' brings out the melancholy of life.
    The poet has expressed it with such dignified grace. Cheers.

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  21. nice poem, is that written on my journey time?

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  22. Awesome piece of Work Bedit.. Keep it Up.. & gud Luck !!!

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