Wednesday, June 9, 2010

Departure

I am bidding goodbye,
To the epitome of my soul;
My memories try to tie,
And boggle me down in the hole.
It is time,
To stop the flowing emotions roar;
I order myself to mime,
And stop being a 'bore'.
I am what I am,
Because of what you have made me;
Here's wishing you loads of wham,
And hoping that you will never forget thee.


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31 comments:

  1. FireboltJune 9, 2010 at 11:07 PM

    Nice poem :)

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  2. Shakti_ShettyJune 10, 2010 at 12:10 AM

    Good poem... loved the pic as well. Reminded me of "Up In The Air" ... Keep writing. :)

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  3. Aditya NandodeJune 10, 2010 at 12:28 AM

    Really nice poem!

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  4. SlaithJune 10, 2010 at 12:35 AM

    Nice poem Man

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  5. Kuntal GuptaJune 10, 2010 at 7:26 AM

    Good Job ;)

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  6. Sanjay MathurJune 10, 2010 at 12:05 PM

    Awesome post, Bedit. You surprise me everytime.

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  7. UnknownJune 10, 2010 at 12:38 PM

    Good poem. Enjoyed it. Thanks.
    Yadu Singh, Sydney
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  8. ani_asetJune 10, 2010 at 1:07 PM

    superb :) loved the last para

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  9. The Art of GiftingJune 10, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    It is a great piece!

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  10. meghaJune 10, 2010 at 5:02 PM

    really nice :))

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  11. parishrutJune 10, 2010 at 5:46 PM

    Sahi Hai Bhidu
    Salutations from Mumbhai

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  12. ViJune 10, 2010 at 6:05 PM

    Beautiful....

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  13. madhu27June 10, 2010 at 7:16 PM

    Nicely written :)

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  14. Ghumakkar PunitJune 11, 2010 at 12:12 AM

    Hey nice poem.....and yess d pic reminded me too of Up In the Air!

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  15. Sneha GargJune 11, 2010 at 9:50 AM

    What a lovely poem !! Bedit, the poet rocks BIG time...

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  16. Sanjukto ChatterjeeJune 11, 2010 at 9:53 AM

    I read the poem 17 times. I guess it explains everything. Serene rendition. Anyways, departure is always painful. So, don't worry.

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  17. neerja tiwariJune 11, 2010 at 3:07 PM

    agree with sanjukto ..departure is painful and best to capture it in words than tears

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  18. SamadritaJune 11, 2010 at 3:40 PM

    That pic does look like a poster of 'Up In The Air'-anyway nice piece. :))

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  19. UnknownJune 11, 2010 at 4:07 PM

    nyc ....

    remind me of mangalore plane crash

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  20. AnkitJune 11, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    good one !! keep it up !! :)

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  21. AnonymousJune 11, 2010 at 11:28 PM

    none shall forget you if you are just yourself and we change for ourselves, none can really make us what we are.... i also believed it, but it is crap!

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  22. Rakesh MenonJune 12, 2010 at 9:07 AM

    liked it!

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  23. AnonymousJune 12, 2010 at 12:56 PM

    lovely.....loved the pic toooo..touching!!

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  24. Ayush PremJune 12, 2010 at 12:58 PM

    lovely....loved d pic..touching!!

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  25. Neha MehtaJune 12, 2010 at 11:25 PM

    lovely poem ..! nicely written and the pic adds flavor to it..!

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  26. Kashish GarewalJune 14, 2010 at 11:26 PM

    I'm in love with this poem. I read it again & again. A complete winner all the way. :)))

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  27. AgnivoJune 15, 2010 at 6:27 AM

    very well composed :)touching....

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  28. Deepshika KapoorJune 15, 2010 at 8:04 PM

    Brilliant. What a poem. I was blown away totally. Bedit, you should consider becoming a full time poet. :-}

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  29. Madhurima SahniJune 16, 2010 at 12:57 PM

    'Departure' brings out the melancholy of life.
    The poet has expressed it with such dignified grace. Cheers.

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  30. AnonymousJune 16, 2010 at 11:26 PM

    nice poem, is that written on my journey time?

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  31. .. Navneet ..June 27, 2010 at 12:17 AM

    Awesome piece of Work Bedit.. Keep it Up.. & gud Luck !!!

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