To be articulate,
Is what one intends to be.
Most try to inculcate;
But alas! It has no effect on me.
Those insuperable turn of events,
Had made me dwell in the agone.
My composure was filled with dents,
When I discerned I was treated as a pawn.
The dawn which I encountered as a chance,
Helped me realize that I had finally won;
And eventually strike balance,
Between letting go and holding on.
Is what one intends to be.
Most try to inculcate;
But alas! It has no effect on me.
Those insuperable turn of events,
Had made me dwell in the agone.
My composure was filled with dents,
When I discerned I was treated as a pawn.
The dawn which I encountered as a chance,
Helped me realize that I had finally won;
And eventually strike balance,
Between letting go and holding on.
What a poem! Loved it. The verses are so poignant.
ReplyDeleteYou are a literary genius! Please write more poems. I am the GREATEST fan of yours.
ReplyDeletelovely poem and so beautifully xpressed to -continue writing more .the dawn ... nice
ReplyDeleteWow. Thank you for sending this my way. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteYou are a poetic gem. And I loved how it ends. Hope you attain the balance...
ReplyDeleteToo Good..
ReplyDeleteMashaAllaah, not bad! I think this is one of your best poems! ;)
ReplyDeleteA truly beautiful and stunning poem! I love it. Thanks for sending it my way on Twitter.
ReplyDeleteHonoured to be a part of your fan club. I am mesmerized by your poem. A big thumbs up.
ReplyDeleteLoved it Bedit..... (Poke)
ReplyDeleteVery nice:))
ReplyDeleteDefinitely appreciate the rhyme and rich imagery. Great content as well...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I loved it!
ReplyDeleteI loved it, despite not having seen much, because I'm Brazilian and do not speak English. It really is a lot. I'm thinking about reciting his poem in Poetry Racital my school, I can?
ReplyDeletePoignant verses,discerned voice, - you dare to express yourself in the poetry! Way to go, Bedit!
ReplyDeleteVery nice poetry dear friend :-)
ReplyDeleteNot a bad poem.
ReplyDeleteGood rhymes.
Moving words and message
ReplyDeleteThese words are good. Not only do you use the words in their correct meaning. But there is quality and balance in every sentences. It is short and classic, and it is opening up, just at the right time. A good read!
ReplyDeleteGoing great dude... lovely :)
ReplyDeleteGoing good Mr. Know it all.....
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