Saturday, May 11, 2013

Parity

To be articulate,
Is what one intends to be.
Most try to inculcate;
But alas! It has no effect on me.

Those insuperable turn of events,

Had made me dwell in the agone.
My composure was filled with dents,
When I discerned I was treated as a pawn.

The dawn which I encountered as a chance,

Helped me realize that I had finally won;
And eventually strike balance,
Between letting go and holding on.


21 comments:

  1. What a poem! Loved it. The verses are so poignant.

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  2. You are a literary genius! Please write more poems. I am the GREATEST fan of yours.

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  3. lovely poem and so beautifully xpressed to -continue writing more .the dawn ... nice

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  4. Wow. Thank you for sending this my way. Beautiful.

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  5. You are a poetic gem. And I loved how it ends. Hope you attain the balance...

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  6. MashaAllaah, not bad! I think this is one of your best poems! ;)

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  7. A truly beautiful and stunning poem! I love it. Thanks for sending it my way on Twitter.

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  8. Satyadeep MahindraMay 13, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    Honoured to be a part of your fan club. I am mesmerized by your poem. A big thumbs up.

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  9. Definitely appreciate the rhyme and rich imagery. Great content as well...

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  10. I loved it, despite not having seen much, because I'm Brazilian and do not speak English. It really is a lot. I'm thinking about reciting his poem in Poetry Racital my school, I can?

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  11. Poignant verses,discerned voice, - you dare to express yourself in the poetry! Way to go, Bedit!

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  12. Very nice poetry dear friend :-)

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  13. Moving words and message

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  14. These words are good. Not only do you use the words in their correct meaning. But there is quality and balance in every sentences. It is short and classic, and it is opening up, just at the right time. A good read!

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